Box-Killa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dub(01)]

yeah ive been their

the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.

I think you need some more practice.

you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song

so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D

well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/246942

[Oney Is Gay For PaperBat]

hehe i love voice acting

a bit slow, the voice was crazy but it produced a small grin.

now listen to my song lol

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/246942

PaperBat responds:

Sewgabitch :O

[Slaying Darkness]

a bit like my metal songs

you have some good content their but you have some major note clashes and no organization

the key to a good song is a good arangement, this is something you need to work on

it seems pritty bassic but try just having an intro, a main beat, and another beat, and maybe an outro.

start with something simple and 5 songs later try experiment, when you have a good, downpack process

but still, this doesnt mean dont go crazy, listen to my song lol and see what i mean

hmm its cool that u recorded. The sound is a bit scratchy tho

the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.

I think you need some more practice.

you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song

so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D

well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/246942

OPQC responds:

BIG thanks, man!
i'll check out that thing!

and btw, guitar isn't recorded X)

[DaftVirgin - Morning Beat 0.1]

hey

hmm its cool that u recorded. The sound is a bit scratchy tho

the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.

I think you need some more practice.

you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song

so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D

well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/246942

iUsername responds:

Thanx man, I know my songs are a bit repetitive and I'm looking for another recording software.
Plz check my other songs as well, I will certainly check your songs too!

[/SN/ Can it Get Happier???]

You should name this "o.m.g. Trance"

Yeah the intro was cool and all but i was just like fuck this i want to get to the trance part already. Yeah i think it should just cut strait into the trance part at 00:11 lol. When it got into the trance bit it was good. Very good. I hated that thing that went from 00:33 to 00:46. The crazy lead starting around 1:30... it started off way cool, then got out of rythmmmmgrrr, still sounded pritty cool nontheless. that thing at 2:03 that was way awesome, to go back into the piano. Well yeah thats pritty much it.

That little thing at the end was awesome and then lol. Reminded me of old anime.

Well it was good yeah. Im mak'n a crappy song atm but im busy with studying 4 examzz so it will probably be crap lol. ok

--the end--

"There is no try, there is only do" Yoda

SessileNomad responds:

lol you must have a pretty A.D.D mind to be like "wtf get to the transorz!!!" after 11 seconds...

lol

yeah that crazy lead i put in, i pretty much just added that so thiis song could have a dark side, and i though the synth sounded sick as fuck

yeah the ding, i thoiught of it right as i finished the track

i luv yodas...

[Techbeat Ii Ms Final]

this is wierd, good drum beat tho

A tad bad, it is empty, needs a melody, a chorus, a structure, SSOMETHING. It needs organisation but u got some good things in there.

[[Aquatic]]

good :D

Into was a little off putting and i'm not used to this sort of feel for drum and base. I usually listen to a more darker? Technoish? Yeah but it was cool. Got a bit boring and you could have had some real melody lines. The sound is very clean though, and it makes a nice sit back and listen tune, with not much going on. Could do with some drum alternation/fills, and not just changing the sound of the drums/ effects. Anyway, peaceout, nice job.
And now ya gotta review me!!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/241747

KrawniK responds:

Thanks :D

Responed, and bonded :D

[/SN/ Singing Angels]

Yep thats a beauty mate

Love the drums! good song. Wasnt that repeditive.

Hmm, the equing kinda wasnt nice, actually i dont know. Dont get that from me, i suck at equing and i just go crazy, although i am starting to get better. I dont know how you could improve just of the top of my head. What i ususally say to people is add a crazy drum solo, wild guitar riffs. You usually have your amazing piano speeds which are awesome. Hmm, maybe like some distant sexy female trance voices or soemthing, i could try do them for you lol.

SessileNomad responds:

i WAS thinking about getting some femal vocals in here, but i have no clue who to get them from, and downloading WAV.s from good movies is just too hard, lol funny we both think if that

idk what to say about the EQ'ing, i didnt to to much to anything as far as that goes

thx for advice

p.s. your equing isnt that bad

[)g888(oxbass&beat]

better than the newest one

better than the newest one, equing wasnt bad, you just being stupid at 30, u should try taking ure time lol :D

G-888 responds:

I did this in like around..........4 minutes...no 7 yeah 7 minutes

[[TMM43] Angel Eyes]

very nice

love the eqing. The intro reminded me of titanic for a sec lol. I can see the effort in this song. Very lovely vocals. Unfortianetly a large portion of newgrounds wont like this. I didnt really sence much originality in this. Could have added some more interesting melody deviations, better drum fills, something to lift the cealing. Anyway if u got time, check me out http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/241747