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no that is fail

i like the original better.

always remember - less is more!!!

it was too "whole" I mean like, it never quietened down or anything, sort of all sounded the same.

sorry

bitium-ribbon responds:

Interesting.

I would have respected your opinion a little more if you hadn't kicked it off with "that is fail."

Hence, you fail at constructive criticism. :-)

EDIT: All sounded the same? I don't mean to sound defensive, but I think I can safely say that 0:20 sounds different from 0.35, which sounds different from 1:35, and so on. *shrug*

Good job just a tad repeditive

The intro was repeditive. Even though the song changed slightly it was still repeditive. DONT BE AFRAID TO CHANGE THE MELODY AROUND. Also i would change that part where it goes all sad and the melody stops to later in the song. The intro melody had no link with the rest of the song. I know i was just saying that you should change the melody but don't change it so drasticaly. You just changed to a completely different melody at the end. Try and have a similar melody, possibaly derived from the first one. It is just what i do. I suppose there is nothing wrong with what you did but I doesn't flow as nicely and the intro is repeditive.

SigmaSpore responds:

yeah i know what ur sayin on the part of the melody not even flowing with most ofthe song, but i actuayl see that in alot of hardstyle music, ESPECIALLY by showtek, theyll have like 2 minutes of voice clippings and wierd effects, then theyl just have a really cool melody

i guess i could have made the melody 16 bars instead of just 8, but ive never made a song with 16 bar melodies, so i think it would be kinda hard to work with

thx for review, also yeah i agree that the intro, middle, and chorus didnt really flow together so greatly, but, win some lose some

Fast paced

It is very fast and has a nice melody. Too bad there is so many songs that sound like this. Maybe try playing it backwards or something. I don't know just try and find something crazy to put in your song.

SigmaSpore responds:

lol yeah happy hardcre songs doo pretty much all sound the same

i would have had alot mroe crazy things to put in it if any of my damn nexus would work, but sadly, it does not

Wahoooo

One piece of advise, don't listen to this song with ear phones on full blast LOL. This song is KILLA! BOX KILLA! Nice job vote 10 + 5

SigmaSpore responds:

lol is the volume too loud, or is ur phones just too loud?

im glad you liked this, tried kinda hard on the crowd effect

cool

how did you make those sounds they are so cool. Yeah long time no see! this song is cool epic techno. but now im better than you. check me out! now

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/223446

SessileNomad responds:

quite easy i just downloaded the wav file, and put it in slicex, then i could play whatever part i wanted

better is reletive, but ill check out your tune right now

we'll see...

indeed long time no see, glad your back

haha

This is like a rap song sung by an emo. LLOLO. Its pritty cool but it is not my style. The music could do with some heavy work. The quality isn't that great. The vocals are a ok!

nice job

Its very very original. The only thing i don't like is that distorted drum thing. The main tune is very good and those wierd bongos are pritty cool too. !!

Zekuence responds:

I try to keep it original. Thanks.

hmm

I nice loop but i think it would sound better as a song. I also hate that small gap newgrounds makes. It kinda sounds like an alien talking and that base drum gave me a fright lol.

nightsurfermusic responds:

It's not talking. It's an extremly filtered noise.

interesting

This is very interesting music; definately not boring. Although, i doubt anyone would want to listen to it. Maybe try a different style all together?

Interesting Song

Your song may be awsome but the intro is everything. The first 10 seconds of the song, or perhaps the first 5 define who will listen to the song. The buzz sound, to me is just annoying. The body of the song is interesting but that buzz is just annoying. The vocals where amazing. The buzz just pissed it totaly though. It was quite a bland song really. My suggestion is just keep practicing, you will become good at entertaining eventually.

RenoakRhythm responds:

thanks for the honesty, will adjust accordingly :D

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