lol
the drums are nice but the fills are a tad boring. The guitar was cool, I guess it isnt really toy song so i ill end this review. 7 or so more reviews to go
lol
the drums are nice but the fills are a tad boring. The guitar was cool, I guess it isnt really toy song so i ill end this review. 7 or so more reviews to go
ouch a 6 the only 6 the only one not a 10 thanks but that 6 is harsh
Flow is key
The intro doesnt flow really taht well. The rest of the song is ok, bit short but has no real draw, keeop working on it, 10-20 songs later you will pull out a waterflame.
Thanks, this is our first techno so yeah its hard to do in structure but im working on it
lol ok
You didn't like my previous review? LOL
I would like to see a proper (or at least a longer) song from. This song would be great with a main lead that you can hear clearly in the foreground. Just because Someone gives you a negative review, doesn't mean you should delete it. You would never improve otherwise. This piece is a small taste of what you can do, i want to see the rest of what you can do. Do you Just make menu screen songs? why not make a 3 min song? Thats all i was saying before but shorter, "more me" version.
Haha, first of all: I most definitely didn't delete your review, because that would simply be egoistic of me, and besides- I can't. There isn't an option to do so, as far as I know. I guess it broke some review rules or something. :P
Secondly: No, I most certainly don't make just menu screen songs, and if you check out "Reclaiming the Wastes" or "Judgment Day" you'll see that for yourself. The original song, "Forest Bounce", was actually made as a joke- I made it out of pure boredom. But it turned out that people liked it, and two of them even requested slight modifications to the song, which is why I made "Woodland Bounce" and "Rockland Bounce". Otherwise, this really isn't my style of work. XD
no that is fail
i like the original better.
always remember - less is more!!!
it was too "whole" I mean like, it never quietened down or anything, sort of all sounded the same.
sorry
Interesting.
I would have respected your opinion a little more if you hadn't kicked it off with "that is fail."
Hence, you fail at constructive criticism. :-)
EDIT: All sounded the same? I don't mean to sound defensive, but I think I can safely say that 0:20 sounds different from 0.35, which sounds different from 1:35, and so on. *shrug*
Good job just a tad repeditive
The intro was repeditive. Even though the song changed slightly it was still repeditive. DONT BE AFRAID TO CHANGE THE MELODY AROUND. Also i would change that part where it goes all sad and the melody stops to later in the song. The intro melody had no link with the rest of the song. I know i was just saying that you should change the melody but don't change it so drasticaly. You just changed to a completely different melody at the end. Try and have a similar melody, possibaly derived from the first one. It is just what i do. I suppose there is nothing wrong with what you did but I doesn't flow as nicely and the intro is repeditive.
yeah i know what ur sayin on the part of the melody not even flowing with most ofthe song, but i actuayl see that in alot of hardstyle music, ESPECIALLY by showtek, theyll have like 2 minutes of voice clippings and wierd effects, then theyl just have a really cool melody
i guess i could have made the melody 16 bars instead of just 8, but ive never made a song with 16 bar melodies, so i think it would be kinda hard to work with
thx for review, also yeah i agree that the intro, middle, and chorus didnt really flow together so greatly, but, win some lose some
Fast paced
It is very fast and has a nice melody. Too bad there is so many songs that sound like this. Maybe try playing it backwards or something. I don't know just try and find something crazy to put in your song.
lol yeah happy hardcre songs doo pretty much all sound the same
i would have had alot mroe crazy things to put in it if any of my damn nexus would work, but sadly, it does not
Wahoooo
One piece of advise, don't listen to this song with ear phones on full blast LOL. This song is KILLA! BOX KILLA! Nice job vote 10 + 5
lol is the volume too loud, or is ur phones just too loud?
im glad you liked this, tried kinda hard on the crowd effect
cool
how did you make those sounds they are so cool. Yeah long time no see! this song is cool epic techno. but now im better than you. check me out! now
quite easy i just downloaded the wav file, and put it in slicex, then i could play whatever part i wanted
better is reletive, but ill check out your tune right now
we'll see...
indeed long time no see, glad your back
nice job
Its very very original. The only thing i don't like is that distorted drum thing. The main tune is very good and those wierd bongos are pritty cool too. !!
I try to keep it original. Thanks.
hmm
I nice loop but i think it would sound better as a song. I also hate that small gap newgrounds makes. It kinda sounds like an alien talking and that base drum gave me a fright lol.
It's not talking. It's an extremly filtered noise.
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