Interesting Song
Your song may be awsome but the intro is everything. The first 10 seconds of the song, or perhaps the first 5 define who will listen to the song. The buzz sound, to me is just annoying. The body of the song is interesting but that buzz is just annoying. The vocals where amazing. The buzz just pissed it totaly though. It was quite a bland song really. My suggestion is just keep practicing, you will become good at entertaining eventually.